
March 2, 2000
Creating a Powerful Press Release
Part 2
by Patrick Tan
My first article, "Creating A Powerful Press Release" showed how
to write a good press release in a format and style that appeals
to editors. It received favorable response from many readers and
a number requested more in-depth information. If you missed this
article, you can read it at:
www.jaydenews.com/archives/022500.html
In this part 2 of the article, you will learn how to identify the
angle or headline of a story. This is the most important step in
writing a press release. The correct choice of a story's angle will
greatly increase the chance of having your story published by the
media.

1) IDENTIFY YOUR READERS
Do you understand your consumers well? As marketers, it is
important for you to recognize the profile and buying behavior
of your consumers. Information such as their age groups, interests
and preferred media would come in handy when you want to reach out
to them effectively.
The key to an effective communication, whether verbal or written,
lies in presenting your message to an interested audience or readers.
Whenever possible, you should only send your press releases to those
media whose readers' profile matches that of your target consumers.
To increase the chance of having your story published, you must
send your press release to the right persons. Look through the
chosen newspapers and identify those reporters who cover events
or activities that share the same theme as your products or
services. You can identify the reporters by the articles' byline.

2) PRIORITIZE YOUR MESSAGES
Before you start writing a press release, you should list down all
the relevant facts and details on a piece of paper. This is a good
writing practice. It helps you to organize your story better. I
encourage every writer to make it a habit to do so.
How should you go about collating all the information and facts
surrounding a particular event? A simple rule of thumb is to find
answers to questions pertaining to the who, what, when, where, why
or 5 Ws of the event. And don't stop at just the absolute facts
and figures. These must be presented in the right perspective
relative to some industry norms, trends and statistics. You may
have to undertake some research by going through past industry
and newspaper reports.
The next step is to evaluate and prioritize the facts according to
their relative importance in conveying your intended message to the
media. The most important fact will form the basis for your story's
angle.

3) RELATE MESSAGE TO READERS
What you want to say about your product or service may not be the
same as what your readers want to know. What this means is that you
and your readers may look at the same event from totally different
perspectives.
To kindle your readers' interest, you must present your intended
message from their perspective. If you have done a good job in
understanding your readers, you should have no problem in empathizing
with their view and interest. This is widely known in journalism as
having "a nose for news". It all boils down to having a sharp
sensitivity to factors that make a person tick!
For example:
A non-profit organization may want to rally the community to
support its vision of increasing the number of foster care homes
for homeless cats and dogs in the neighborhood.
This message might go down well with pet lovers whose love for pets
would be sufficient motivation for them to provide a home for the
homeless cats and dogs. But, it may not necessarily touch the heart
of the majority.
The organization could, however, increase its chances of getting
community support by focusing on how a greater number of foster
care homes could help alleviate the problems associated with having
too many stray cats and dogs in the neighborhood.
In other words, the organization is providing a solution to a
problem, which, if left unchecked, could become a menace to the
community. For example, stray cats and dogs running loose on
busy streets could result in traffic accidents. To highlight
the severity of the problem, a statement of this kind should
be supported with statistics.
The above example illustrates how we can present the same event -
provide foster care homes for cats and dogs - from two different
perspectives - a love for pets (organization) and a concern that
stray cats and dogs could become a menace (community).

4) PRESENT STORY IN RIGHT CONTEXT
The above example also demonstrates the importance of presenting
your story in the right context. It is a fact that there are many
homeless cats and dogs in the neighborhood. But can you establish
the claim that stray cats and dogs could become a menace to the
community. You may have to undertake some research by going through
past community and and newspaper reports. If necessary, consider
conducting an opinion poll at your website, or in your neighborhood,
to gauge public response.
You are now ready to present the headline or angle of your story.
Using the above example, the headline could go like this:
Say "NO" to stray cats and dogs!
Sub-headline:
[Name of organization] offers solution to clear up the streets.
Opening paragraph:
Giving stray cats and dogs a home may be the answer to a long-
standing problem, which if left unchecked, could grow to become a
menace to our community.
Followed by statistics:
. . . . . to illustrate the severity of the problem.
Followed by details and merits of increasing the number of foster
care homes for homeless cats and dogs in the neighborhood.
The above tips should help you get started on writing a press
release yourself. Remember that practice makes perfect and the
best way to learn how to write an effective press release is to
observe how business news is reported in the business section of
your newspapers.

Article by Patrick Tan of Aloha-City.
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